Talk:Kouki Amanogawa/@comment-190.79.240.76-20190926003732

Can someone with editing rights correct the many grammar mistakes in the article? It lowers its qualtiy and it's awful to see.

Here are the ones I spotted:

1) After his grandfather's death 2) grandfather's teaching 3) To further say it > Furthermore 4) while holding to his ideals 5) came to never doubt his own righteousness 6) he ignores it and simply believes in his righteousness 7) can't accept when things don't go the way he wants 8) Kaori decided to follow Hajime of her own free will. He couldn't accept it as he always believes 9) He further wrongly assumes that all the girls 10) what they have been doing 11) and ends up giving them an opening 12) Eri made use of this 13) getting defeated as a result 14) on the topic of love and killing 15) coupled with the fact that both of them have very different ways of thinking 16) Hajime's immense power 17) didn't believe he needs to use 18) to get what he wants 19) hurts Kaori more than helps her 20) Shizuku usually tries 21) he pleaded Shizuku not to leave him 22) Eri sees Kouki 23) to be hers 24) Kouki was shocked and saddened 25) and ended up hesitating